Sentence 29
英文原文:
For example, people who believe that aggression is necessary and justified—as during wartime—are likely to act aggressively, whereas people who believe that a particular war or act of aggression is unjust, or who think that aggression is never justified, are less likely to behave aggressively.
OG Practice Set 4:Aggression
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参考翻译:
举例来说,相信攻击性行为是必需的和正义的人——比如在战争时期——更倾向于表现得有攻击性,而那些相信一场特定的战争或攻击性行径是不正义的,抑或相信攻击性行为绝非正义之举的人则更少地会表现出攻击性。
知识点小结:
1.在这句话的分析过程中,首先要注意到“whereas”,可理解为“in contrast or comparison with the fact that”,中文意思是“然而;却”。
2.以“whereas”为分割:看到中间部分“...whereas people...”就应该知道本部分应该和前面的“for example, people...”相对应。
3.以“who”为分割:看到末尾处的“...or who think that aggression...”就应该知道本部分应该对应“...who believe that a particular...”。
4.本次翻译一共讲了两大类人(用“whereas”进行分割),第二类又分为两个小类(用“or”进行分割)。
与本次句子翻译相关的阅读题目:
Which of the sentences below best expresses the essential information in the highlighted sentence in the passage? Incorrect answer choices change the meaning in important ways or leave out essential information.
For example, people who believe that aggression is necessary and justified—as during wartime—are likely to act aggressively, whereas people who believe that a particular war or act of aggression is unjust, or who think that aggression is never justified, are less likely to behave aggressively.
A. People who believe that they are fighting a just war act aggressively while those who believe that they are fighting an unjust war do not.
B. People who believe that aggression is necessary and justified are more likely to act aggressively than those who believe diff erently.
C. People who normally do not believe that aggression is necessary and justified may act aggressively during wartime.
D. People who believe that aggression is necessary and justified do not necessarily act aggressively during wartime.
汉英翻译练习:
有些人喜欢一次只专注于一个项目,认为这样效率会更高、效果也会更好;而有些却认为同时做几个项目能更充分地利用时间,在更短的时间内完成更多的项目。
参考翻译:
Some people like concentrating on one project at a time, believing that this practice would be more efficient and would achieve better results; whereas others think that doing several projects at the same time enables them to make full use of their time, making it possible for them to finish more projects within the same amount of time.
请将以上句子扩充后的中文段落翻译成英文:
(1)不同的人做事方式不同:有些人喜欢一次只专注于一个项目,认为这样效率会更高、效果也会更好;而有些人却认为同时做几个项目能更充分地利用时间,在更短的时间内完成更多的项目。(2)对于我来说,更喜欢前者,也就是一次只专注于一件事情。(3)我总觉得,要想把一件事情做好,必须全神贯注——无论这件事情是大是小;是需要长时间才能完成的还是短时间就能解决的;是自己就能完成的,还是需要协作才能完成的。
大家想一想,该翻译练习是不是可以用到下面的托福写作中呢?
写作题目:
Some people prefer to finish a project completely before starting another. Others prefer to do two or several projects at the same time. Which way would you prefer?
——2007.6.24
勇哥批改学生翻译练习:
赖中华:
改前:①Different people have different way of doing things. Someone prefers to finish a project before starting another, they think it will be more efficient and will achieve better effect, whereas some other people think operating various project at the same time will let them fully use the time, and they will complete more projects within a shorter time.
②For me, I prefer the former, which is concentrate in one project in a certain time and to finish a project completely before starting another.
③I always think, you should concentrate if you want to finish one thing perfectly, regardless the thing is big or small, the thing require longtime or short time, the thing could be finished by myself or require cooperate with others.
改后:①Diff erent people have diff erent ways of doing things. Some people prefer to finish a project before starting another. They think it will be more efficient and will achieve better effect, whereas some other people think operating various projects at the same time will let them fully use the time, and they will complete more projects within a shorter time.
②For me, I prefer the former, which is to concentrate on one project in a certain timeframe and to finish a project completely before starting another.
③I always think you should concentrate if you want to finish one thing perfectly, regardless of whether the thing is big or small, requires a long time or a short time, or could be finished by yourself or requires cooperation with others.
文儿:
改前:①Different people take various ways of doing things: people who are accustomed to concentrate one project at one time think it would be more efficient and could get better result; whereas people who believe dealing more than one projects at a time could take the time using in more sufficient way could accomplish more projects in shorter time.
②As for me, I prefer the former, namely concentrating one thing at a time.
③I always believe that if you are to do one thing well, you must be keep yourself absorbed in it—it is either a trifle or important matter;either take long time to complete or deal in a short time; either complete by yourself or complete by coordination.
改后:①Different people take various ways of doing things: people who are accustomed to concentrating on one project at one time think it would be more efficient and could get a better result; whereas people who believe in dealing with more than one project at a time could take the time used in a more efficient way and could accomplish more projects in shorter time.
②As for me, I prefer the former, namely concentrating on one thing at a time.
③I always believe that if you are to do one thing well, you must keep yourself absorbed in it—it is either a trifle or an important matter;either takes a long time to complete or can be completed in a short time; can be completed either by yourself or by coordination.
朱迪佳:
改前:①Diff erent people do things in diff erent ways. For example, people who believe focusing on only one project, in that way, they can get higher efficient and better results;whereas people who believe doing several projects at a same time, so that they can finish more works in a short time.
②When it occurs to me, I prefer the first choice, as to finish one work at a time.
③I believe, if you want do something excellent, you must focus on it, whatever the work matters or not; how many time should it takes and you can finish it alone or with a team.
改后:①Diff erent people do things in diff erent ways. For example, people who believe focusing on only one project can get higher efficiency and better results; whereas some people believe doing several projects at a same time, so that they can finish more work in a short time.
②When it occurs to me, I prefer the first choice, as to finish one task at a time.
③I believe, if you want do something excellently, you must focus on it, whether the work matters or not; however long it takes;whether you can finish it alone or with a team.
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